You lost an item while traveling on a bus. An employee of the bus company assisted you in recovering your lost item. Write a letter to the company manager to thank the employee.
In your letter
• describe what you lost and why it was important to you
• how the employee helped you find it
• and explain how you felt after recovering it.
Dear Manager,
I am writing a letter to express my thankful to your front desk’s staff, Mrs Brown. She gave a big help for me which recover my lost hand case.
I traveled to New York City by your company’s bus in order to go to a business conference two days ago. This conference is very famous in the world, almost all of the potential technology company’s CEO will attend.
However, I realized my hand case loss after I reached the conference hall. I phoned to the bus company’s front desk immediately to asked for help to find my brown hand case in middle size. Due to important business documents, my laptop as well as the conference presentation files are in the hand case.
A half an hour later, I am glad that I can get back my hand case ahead of the presentation and run the conference as a smooth sailing. Therefore, I would like to give my grateful gratitude to Mrs Brown.
I wish this letter highlights how dedicated front desk you have in your enterprise. I will surely use and recommend your bus network again.
Yours faithfully,
Suki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...nce is very famous in the world, almost all of the potential technology company’s CEO will...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62303664921 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7263967467 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607329842932 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6521704869 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5833333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190677058485 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699859833578 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556052191992 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10611912331 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685892732291 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.