You moved to a new country and you want to write a letter to your former colleague.
In your letter, you should:
tell him/her where did you go and what you are doing there (job)
describe your feeling
invite your friend to come.
Dear Rahul,
Hope you are doing good. I have been thinking of writing to you for a long time, but lately I was caught up with some paper works. I am sorry that I didn't mention this to you prior, I have moved to Canada. I was not sure how the whole things would turn out, so I didn't mention this to anyone and you are the first person I am writing about this.
Even though I have got a PR here, I have not decided on the work stream to follow precisely. But currently I am having a part time job, which pretty much take care of my expenses over here. I am going through the different opportunities here and hopefully will sought out one soon. These days, I miss our hometown very badly, I miss the days we spend together in the beach talking for hours, planning on the silly things. Thinking about that, those are the moments that I will never forget. Although, I feel a bit of homesick over here, I am glad that I took the initiative to come here.
Thinking further on that, it would be great if you can plan a visit to here, let make it a vacation trip for you. Anyway I would need more time to settle over here. So I would suggest you to plan your next summer vacation to be with me over here in Canada. There are lots of thing that need to explored here and I am looking for a good partner, who better that you can fill that spot. So I hope you will be able to make it here in the coming summar vacation. Do write me about the things going on there, waiting to hear from you.
Yours lovingly
Akash A
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ith some paper works. I am sorry that I didnt mention this to you prior, I have moved...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s to you prior, I have moved to Canada. I was not sure how the whole things would...
^
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...w the whole things would turn out, so I didnt mention this to anyone and you are the ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... precisely. But currently I am having a part time job, which pretty much take care of my ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'seek'
Suggestion: seek
...t opportunities here and hopefully will sought out one soon. These days, I miss our ho...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of things'.
Suggestion: lots of things
... with me over here in Canada. There are lots of thing that need to explored here and I am loo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, look, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 298.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09060402685 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06823871177 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553691275168 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6303257753 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7058823529 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35294117647 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237123754472 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882429974724 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717093372896 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155690345344 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950791240912 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.23 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.