You need to attend a family event. Your child will be missing school for a day. Write a letter to the school principal and say–1- What is the event?2- Why is it important for your child to be there?3- How will your child make up
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to inform you that due to commitment with a family event, my son will be unable to attend at school on next Monday.
My parents are visiting us in the city for a month to see their grandchildren. When I came to know that their marriage anniversary is on Monday, we decided to celebrate this very special moment with them. It will be having a good sentimental impression on them, if we attended the celebration.
I read several articles about children education, and attending such events is an important part for building up his personality. Therefore, it will be an amazing chance for him to spend some quality time with his grandfather and grandmother. My son will learn also that the love can be continued ever after between two people.
At Monday, some subjects will be skipped due to his absence. I can teach it at home. I would therefore request that you share with me his Monday schedule and other homework needed to cover it at home. It will be very useful to catch all subjects in his classes.
I look forward to receiving your list and activities.
Yours sincerely,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...activities. Yours sincerely, Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74747474747 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69870938481 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651515151515 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0113654757 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3076923077 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270383219609 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901740954311 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573882011158 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137855911373 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611951771814 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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