You need to attend a family event. Your child will be missing school for a day. Write a letter to the school principal and say–
1- What is the event?
2- Why is it important for your child to be there?
3- How will your child make up
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to inform you that my son will be unable to attend the school on next Monday due to our commitment with a family occasion.
Currently, my parents are visiting the city, and they will stay with us for a complete month. Fortunately, I realized that my parents` wedding anniversary is on Monday; therefore, I decided to celebrate this special moment with them. My home is relatively small, but I did some arrangement in the garden for the celebration, and it will be a good place for kids to have spacious place to play.
My parents live in another city, and it is barely to meet them. Though, I find this event a good chance for my son to spend some family time with his grandfather and grandmother. A recent survey has been undertaken by a prestigious university reported that family event strengthens the family relationships.
Some lessons will be missed by my son on Monday. I would therefore request that you list it down for me, and I will teach it at home by myself. If there is also home work, I will ensure it is done properly.
I look forward to receiving the lessons list.
Yours sincerely,
Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68292682927 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77354717826 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590243902439 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1823085509 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234452428043 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829591336489 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565096833648 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113061434607 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650532287725 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.