Television has a significant influence on people lives in many societies. To what extent do you think it has positive or negative effects.
Television, an essential device in all homes, has significant effects on individuals and nations development. it is believed that different influences have been measured from the television on societies. I am supportive of the opinion that the negative effects outweigh its positive ones. This essay will discuss how quick do news being exchanged through the television as one of the advantages of this. In addition to outlining the detrimental result on our children as the main disadvantages followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Most of the countries have their own media streams to spread the news either locally or globally, and the news help their nation to be updated with current world development. Exchanging the news direct people to take precautions if there is threat touches their resident area. For example, natural incidents may occur and becomes a danger to people who live in the same vicinity where in Taiwan a lot of volcanos are extremely active. People decide to move away from this area once they got alarmed by their government through the media on the national television.
On the contrary, there is no doubt that the television has sometimes its drawbacks on the future generation and country development. Some published programs are not suitable for all ages, especially for children, and these programs are easy to be accessed without any restriction as these are free open on the local channels. For instance, Television shows which introduce violence should not be seen by children who may practice the same alone with similar peers. There is undertaken survey by a prestigious university reported a high rate of violence from toddlers who are exposed to similar shows and tried to copy it at their schools.
To sum up, benefits of the television are measured in a very positive way, but the drawbacks can not be denied on future generation. It can be controlled by government by filtering the presented media through open channel which are commonly being watched in our homes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12765957447 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8239192307 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58358662614 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9151392368 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.466666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121897644246 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426088778213 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415632363727 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717125436351 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051509474063 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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