You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter:
1- Explain why you are selling the television.
2-Describe the television.
3- Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear John,
It`s been so long since we have last met. I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing to tell you that I am selling some gadgets, including my new television, which you may be interested in.
Last month, I signed a contract for a new apartment, and It is fully furnished with all electric devices, including one high-resolution TV in the living room. When I checked the flat, I realized that only one TV is enough. Though, I do not need my old TV, and I offered it for sale in different social websites.
I bought the TV two years ago, and it was recently published in the market by a reputable brand. The TV size is 40 inches, and it comes with a wall holder. There are minor scratches on the body, but the frame looks shiny and new. It works functionally with no significant errors.
Your work place is nearby. I would therefore suggest that you visit me after your duties to inspect the TV and that you try to decide whether you buy it or not. I offer also a free transportation to your home if it works with you.
Warm regards,
Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42288557214 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5623387871 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4110666773 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3846153846 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270189562871 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794180524197 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119088201822 0.0603063233224 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160832082011 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15400767561 0.0580467560999 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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