You need to do more physical exercise. Write a letter to your friend asking him to join you.
In your letter, you should tell:
why you want to do physical exercise
what type of physical exercise you are planning to do
why you want your friend to join you.
Dear Chris,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I am writing this letter to ask you to accompany me for the regular workout.
I have put on some extra kilos due to my sitting job. At the same time, my physician has highly recommended me to start indulging in physical activities regularly to keep myself disease free. Therefore, I have made my mind to include a strenuous workout in my daily health regime to beat obesity.
Well, I am planning to join a fitness centre situated in the vicinity of my house, which is also close to yours. In fact, it offers an interesting schedule of a complete week including cardio, weight-lifting, Zumba, meditation and yoga - basic and advanced. Enclosed is the brochure so that you can have a quick look.
I would really appreciate If you can join me. It will benefit both of us in our physical well-being and living a healthy lifestyle. I really enjoy your company and feel that your continuous boosting would keep me motivated and enthusiastic.
I am anticipating a positive response from you.
Best wishes,
Ell Green
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ccompany me for the regular workout. I have put on some extra kilos due to my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, therefore, thus, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80628272251 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78941140247 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675392670157 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5319674386 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6153846154 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252333927544 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086425935914 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809642195791 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146112811449 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803151155447 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.