You need to shift your flat and in this connection you are looking for a new flat. You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper.
Now write a letter to the owner of the flat asking to provide you with required information.
Dear Mr. John,
This is with reference to your advertisement regarding flat for rental. My name is Abdul and i am working as an IT professional near to the flat which was advertised. My existing accommodation is a few blocks away and we have been served with a month’s notice for eviction.
I am eagerly in need of an accommodation and your flat is in the same vicinity of my work place. My existing accommodation will be demolished to give way to a new high rise commercial complex. I have been living as a tenant for more than 5 years and i have an excellent record with my landlord. I can provide details of my landlord and you are at your liberty to enquire about me.
To take things further, I would request you to provide me with complete details of the flat including the rental charges. I am single but I have a cat as a pet and is the flat pet friendly? I assure you that it is a quiet and friendly cat. Does the accommodation provide a parking spot and is it part of the rental or is it charged separately? Kindly provide me with an appointment to view the flat and meet with you in person to discuss in detail.
Thanking you,
Yours truly,
Abdul
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g flat for rental. My name is Abdul and i am working as an IT professional near t...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...l. My name is Abdul and i am working as an IT professional near to the flat which was...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37442922374 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77665372057 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543378995434 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.7017963017 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.6923076923 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366981755231 0.216113520407 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134586599695 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074032303021 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235250605781 0.12726935374 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502093097111 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.