You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilities for shoppers could be improved.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter:
• say in general what you like about shopping in your area
• say what is wrong with the facilities
• suggest how they can be improved
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the frequent traffic jams near central mall in city center which is one of the busiest streets in the city.
To begin with, City center is a favorite stop for all the shopaholic people around the city because it offers huge varieties of products at affordable price. I am one of the frequent visitors to the place because it is one stop destination to purchase all the household items. However, as the area is little congested, the unavailability of parking space is a key contributor to this traffic. People without a choice have to leave their vehicles on the road while they are shopping. Thus, it is the time when as citizen we seek authorities’ involvement.
Nevertheless, there is a vacant and unused ground at the end of the street which can be effectively utilized to construct a paid parking for the shoppers. In this way, not only traffic problem can be addressed but it can generate revenue for maintenance of market. This means hitting two birds with a single bow.
I look forward to hearing from you and your active participation in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, nevertheless, thus, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86206896552 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83858419669 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645320197044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6669955993 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7272727273 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118133428449 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435047739465 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505128963153 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765048963573 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534016153822 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.