You ordered a new check book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service.Say when and how you ordered the check book.Ask how much longer you will have to wait andask the manage

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You ordered a new check book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service.
Say when and how you ordered the check book.
Ask how much longer you will have to wait and
ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about the bad service I have received from your bank.

I have been the customer of your bank since 7 years ago. Unfortunately, my last check book has finished and I have ordered a new one 2 weeks ago on 26th of June. I checked your website and by using the customer and services section I could register my request and I have been given a reference number for further followings which is 223355xc.

I would like to know how much longer I have to be waited for getting my new check book since there is a brilliant bargain for the home appliances in Ikea shop and I need the check book for purchasing a few of my necessary items such as fridge and washing machine. This sale would be finished by the end of June.

Since it has passed more than 2 weeks of my request, I would like you to pay a considerate attention to this issue and take it of high priority. Otherwise, I would be entitled to take the issue to the court.

I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about the bad s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37623762376 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47003411367 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579207920792 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6679692433 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306694233506 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105210395638 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076394523245 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156634826437 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590157750922 0.0580467560999 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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