you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the m

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you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about the poor service provided by your bank recently. Because I need a new cheque-book, I applied for it before 14 days ago. But, still, It has not been received by me till now. Regarding this issue, I made a call on last week to know the tracking number of my cheque book; however, your staff denied to answer this question.

Kindly allow me to elaborate on this matter. Firstly, I Ordered this via online portal service of your State Bank of Patiala Portal. I had filled all the forms which are required and submitted this on the same day and secondly I already paid amount 1000 rupees to get this cheque book via my card. However, I have been 2 weeks, but it has not been received till now.

My account number is CA00179856892 and I need your favour to deal with this matter personally Moreover, Could you tell me, how much time you will take to send this to me? Owing to this what action you would like to take to avoid such kind of trouble again.

Looking forward to your prompt action.
Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet Kaur

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 333, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denied answering'.
Suggestion: denied answering
... of my cheque book; however, your staff denied to answer this question. Kindly allow me to el...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.515 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28231790073 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5357538769 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224682631107 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711100608438 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465393971615 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118151058507 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595432344403 0.0580467560999 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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