Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.
Nowadays, cars are used on a high scale by individuals. Even though cars are the most convenient way of transportation; however, it causes pollution. This essay will discuss both the benefits of cars and drawbacks of using this on a wide range.
People are benefited from cars in various ways. Although, there are other various modes of transportation, cars are most popular for convenience. For instance, the people who are living in crowded cities prefer to use their own cars rather than congested public transport. Moreover, these are more advantageous for those who work up to late at night. Because of late-night timing, most of the people use these to travel from their workplace to home.
On the contrary, the adverse effects of cars cause air pollution. They emit harmful gases which are responsible for global warming. For instance, if we talk about big cities where these are used on a huge scale, then 80 % of air is polluted just because of the use of cares. It contributes to air pollution so people suffer from many health diseases such as breathing problem.
In conclusion, while using cares has some merits, its cons supersede the pros of causing air pollution which is a major problem currently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96097560976 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73059439048 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639024390244 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0830274423 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.2307692308 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136892356631 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055428939582 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475925228905 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783970497696 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684460239633 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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