Technology has made the human life more easier and convenient as compared to the past decades. Now majority of the tasks are done by using advancement technology than human power. In this essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of this development.
There are some reasons why people think machines are more useful than human hands. The main reason one of them is time. As people have an adequate time to spend it with their family. In this way, they can fulfill their desires and are able to know what family expect from them. Another reason is saving cost of the company. Employers need not to hire lots of employees, machines are capable to do any task with an accuracy. So, it will not only improve their goodwill in the market but also helps to maintain efficiency at workplace.
On the opposite side, there are various drawbacks which can not be ignored. Firstly, the dependence on technology will enhance if the work is done by machines. Therefore, people like to manage their work on computer screens which put bad impact on their posture as well as weaken their eyesight too. Moreover, machines can replace the humans. Consequently, underdeveloped and developing nations can face the poverty and unemployment at higher level which makes the country more poorer.
Furthermore, machines are usually handle by employees. If the uneducated or new employees operate the machines without sufficient training then it will cause them. They may be suffer from harmful injuries while working on machines. Last but not least, machines inept to perform the creative work. For instance, the original work done by many artisans which never be reproduced by any machines.
To sum up, the negative effects outweigh the positive effects on the individual and society. To fulfill the needs of the population, the balance has to be maintained among manual work and mechanization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
Technology has made the human life more easier and convenient as compared to the past ...
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Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s. The main reason one of them is time. As people have an adequate time to spend i...
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Line 2, column 344, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hire'?
Suggestion: hire
...cost of the company. Employers need not to hire lots of employees, machines are capable...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'poorer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: poorer
...at higher level which makes the country more poorer. Furthermore, machines are usually h...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the country more poorer. Furthermore, machines are usually handle by employees...
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Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'handled'.
Suggestion: handled
...r. Furthermore, machines are usually handle by employees. If the uneducated or new ...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed among manual work and mechanization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00961538462 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62929738092 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6025510858 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.0454545455 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77272727273 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19009767517 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489698036913 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405995221628 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936469673365 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428044463938 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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