You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. Yesterday, we had arranged party at your restaurant, which turned out to be great success. It was my grand father's birthday, that we wanted to celebrate by inviting his colleagues and relatives. Your staff, was highly cooperative and was available to accommodate us and provide with every sort of help.
Moreover, they provided us with great ideas, about how we should plan things and where the decoration things are needed to be placed. Furthermore, we were having few difficulties, when it came to choosing cake from your collection, but your staff was really friendly and provided us with more options from your other branch. Variety of desserts, were presented and tasted wonderful.
So, we would like to thank you and your staff members from providing us a great experience. Moreover, this will be one of the events, that my family will remember and hopefully, we will plan more events in your hotel.
Yours Sincerely
Mitchell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. Yeste...
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Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us and provide with every sort of help. Moreover, they provided us with great id...
^^^
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to cake'
Suggestion: to cake
... difficulties, when it came to choosing cake from your collection, but your staff wa...
^^^^
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... events in your hotel. Yours Sincerely Mitchell
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, well, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64043400431 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670731707317 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9350642594 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164240586638 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651223808353 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498811811182 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115476511848 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643313512642 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.