You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique shop.
In your letter
explain how you found the shop
describe the item that you would like to sell
say how much you would like to sell the item for
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to sell an antique piece at your shop and I believe that it would attract more customers to your shop.
As for how I came to know about your business, I read an advert in the local newspaper, where it was published that your shop deals with ancient items and accepts such valuables from individuals. One of my friends, who is a regular patron also mentioned that you have been in this business since 1980 and serve customers well.
The item in question is the sculpture of Lord Buddha, which is made of brass and crafted by an artist from medieval time. It is a classic piece of art and would enhance the beauty of a living room. I bought it last year when I went on a trip to Bangkok.
By considering its graceful look, quality and condition, I would like to sell it for Rs. 5000 only and would like to accept cash payment for this deal. I have also enclosed the invoice, showing the original cost of this item. Let me know if you like this offer and would like to close the deal.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ell
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38725490196 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26571893987 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2717601456 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3636363636 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383988313286 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113900434909 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811450291166 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184304498643 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727577959058 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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