You owrk for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a trainning course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
- describe the training course you want to do;
- explain what the company could do to help you;
- say how the course will be useful for your job;
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you regarding a training course I took knowledge in a website and this might be helpful in my daily activities and the company will benefit from it.
Let me tell you what is the course all about and how this can affect the firm. First of all, this training is about complience and it is an important matter because prepare the company and the staff to better serve clients, deal with regulations and also teaches how to conduct dilligent process inside the firm.
In addition, since this course will benefit the company, I would be glad to know if there is a manner of the company pay for it and cover the expenses with materials and travels because the lecture will be given in Townsville which is about 2 hours lenght driving from here.
Despite some may argue that complience is not important and unnecessary, I read articles and researches that told me to very opposite. It is a demanding and growing field in companies because it a serious process that only cautious firms. Also, this transmits an more transparent and trustworthy idea to our clients.
Therefore, I hope hearing from you as soon as possible to enroll myself in this training course.
Your faithful,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ly cautious firms. Also, this transmits an more transparent and trustworthy idea t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77314814815 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5308750188 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6644122052 44.8134815571 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.555555556 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223223119845 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814581745682 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497924937677 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108410980618 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430825106391 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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