You planned to throw a surprise party for your father on his 60th birthday.
Write a letter to your aunt, in your letter, write-
• Invite her to the surprise party
• Explain why this party means a lot to you
• Say what you want to bring with her
Dear Aunt Molly,
Hope you receive this letter in the best of your health. I am sure you might be aware of the fact that dad is turning 60 next week.
I am planning a surprise party for him, since, none of our festivities are complete without you, therefore I am inviting and informing you well in advance, so that you do not miss the celebration. Moreover, your knowledge of event organization will make the day more manageable.
I am excited about the event and want to make it a memorable one for him. Besides, this would be a way to thank him for his never ending support and being a great friend. Additionally, this might be one of the few chances going forward, that I can spend time with him, considering that fact that soon I will be migrating to Australia for work.
The fact cannot be denied that you and dad share a special bond, so can I request you to bring some old photographs of your childhood and college days. I had an idea of running a short film for him during the evening party, besides present it as a souvenir to him. Last but not the least, will it be possible for you to bring your hand-make cookies, he enjoys them during breakfast.
Looking forward seeing you.
Best Wishes,
Alex
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...em during breakfast. Looking forward to see you. Best Wishes, Alex
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, look, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47136563877 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47943667036 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1464778913 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5833333333 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282525071962 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104126573668 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758541879763 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170141422214 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735568196454 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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