You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of team had an accident and was not able to play with you that we can. You decide to write to him in hospital telling him about the match.
-Tell him which came on.
-Describe the condition on the day.
Say how you felt about the match
Dear John,
I have heard about you that you had an accident which was not major. I hope you are feeling much better now. The purpose of mine to pen down this epistle is to tell you all the scenario of the cricket match, which was played on last weekend.
First of all, the match was very exciting because the opposite team members had capability to defeat. We scored 262 runs over 264 runs and almost won the match. The most of awful thing was that at the last boll they took and another wicket, which changed the whole scenario of the game.
In addition, the climate was to blame. On that day, the climate was quite wet that the pitch of the play ground was so muddy. Due to this reason, every member of the team felt exhausted, because they were unable to run in the playground to score more.
To be honest, I am not satisfied with the performance of our team in the playground. As, all the team members had put a lot of efforts to win the match but all efforts gone to vain. However, I deem that if you were there, then you will definitely score more because you are the master blaster of our team.
I will meet you as soon as possible and I will pray for you to recovery from injury.
Yours truly
AmanYou play a team sport with some friends
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... almost won the match. The most of awful thing was that at the last boll they too...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, as to, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29288702929 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04130934844 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585774058577 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5937835489 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2857142857 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372612032012 0.216113520407 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119111684029 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722010634758 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190636297197 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876197142516 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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