You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
tell him which team won
describe the conditions on the day
say how you felt about the match
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Jake,
I hope you are recovering and doing better now. I will come to meet you tomorrow. Today's match was a great success. Yes, we won it. It was an unexpected victory for our team. There was a sudden downpour in the midst of the match. We were neck to neck and there was much uncertainity throughout the match as both the teams were playing tremendously well.
As we were nearing the end, we scored a perfect goal that completed the match fetching us with the victory. It was truly a do or die match We were receiving constant support from the audience throughout the match. Their encouragement boosted up our confidence levels to the highest. We have been awarded with certificates and cash price for the great achievement. All of us felt thrilled and exited playing this match. We were literally on cloud nine.
The only disappointment was your absence. Our whole team missed you terribly. But, we made sure we won the match. We thought this would be the best possible gift we can owe you. Don't worry, we will definitely rock again for the next match with you. Love you always. Stay happy and see you soon.
Yours lovingly,
Krithika.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'necked'.
Suggestion: necked
...pour in the midst of the match. We were neck to neck and there was much uncertainity...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ching us with the victory. It was truly a do or die match We were receiving constant...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
... the best possible gift we can owe you. Dont worry, we will definitely rock again fo...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...n for the next match with you. Love you always. Stay happy and see you soon. ...
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Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... happy and see you soon. Yours lovingly, Krithika. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88235294118 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52802439532 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637254901961 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0409828485 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 47.4285714286 76.5299724578 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 9.71428571429 16.8248392259 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.809523809524 4.34317383033 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191843520889 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657488162355 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439801000612 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106176025056 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671123548411 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.26 70.7449484536 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.54 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.