You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions on the day
• say how you felt about the match
Dear John,
I am writing this letter to let you know that last week we had a great match against Cricket Australia team and we won that match with the margin of 52 runs ahead.
Although, the weather was not permitting us to play in the morning hours because of rain showers, later on, the sun starts shining at 11 AM and continued till the match ended. The moisture of morning hours has supported us with the ball and we were able to bold out Australia team with 160 runs in total.
However, each and every player of the team has missed you during the match, especially Robin, he was remembering at every moment of the game. We all are excited after winning this maiden trophy and for my concern, I personally realize the game was not easy to win.
I hope you are doing speedy recovery from your injuries and wish to see you soon on the cricket ground.
With regards,
James.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... during the match, especially Robin, he was remembering at every moment of the game. We all are...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n on the cricket ground. With regards, James.
^^^
Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ricket ground. With regards, James.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47239263804 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15138950362 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656441717791 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6444828761 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27370084463 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111654377555 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684739955857 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150634852322 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602354449999 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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