You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
tell him which team won
describe the conditions on the day
say how you felt about the match
Dear Justin,
I hope you are doing well. It was really sad to hear about the fracture on your hand during the practice session. As a team, we were disappointed because you will not be able to join us for the crucial match.
Therefore, there was no other option for us to find a substitute for your replacement. Despite this, you will be glad to hear that we won the match and qualified to the next round finally. Before the match started, we know it is going to be tough for us to compete and almost the defeat was accepted by everyone. Initially, the huge support from our local crowd changed everything now we were boosted and ready to take it on. At the last, the scores were level and it was all on the penalties. I was afraid, due to we do not have a regular goalkeeper to handle this situation in your absence. I thought that's it, we will lose the game but David was amazing that day he saved two brilliant goals which were more than enough to register a great win for us.
Surely, we missed you in this match. I wish you will recover soon before the coming games. Take care of yourself.
Warm wishes,
Peter Evans
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Justin, I hope you are doing well. It was really...
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Line 9, column 604, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...is situation in your absence. I thought thats it, we will lose the game but David was...
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Line 13, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he coming games. Take care of yourself. Warm wishes, Peter Evans
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke care of yourself. Warm wishes, Peter Evans
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39150943396 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2604135821 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646226415094 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4458935999 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132917580999 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526498825622 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466796081019 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12496178062 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524846480227 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.