Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
Undoubtedly, the ecosystem is disturbed by the interference of human beings which cause the loss of endangered species, therefore, it is a serious problem all around the globe. Let us examine it’s reasons, effects and propose a solution.
First and foremost, the increased pollution such as plastic is causing ill effects on the climate this leads to the extinction of species and plants. This plastic cannot be destroyed easily; the dumps of plastic leads to soil erosion and with wind this plastic went into rivers and sea. Due to this water is polluted and the marine life is in danger. To illustrate, the research report by Chicago University shows growth and reproduction rate of marine species is decreased because of toxins in the ocean produced by plastic waste.
Secondly, extensive forest cutting is also affecting the environment. In many countries, forests are diminishing rapidly due to the construction of roads or acquiring more land for agriculture and accommodation. Hence, the habitats of the animals are demolished; the lack of resources namely, food and shelter causing the death of species. For instance, according to news channels reports, the attack of grizzly bears on humans is increased by 20% in decades because of houses constructed nearby forests.
Therefore, it is crucial to effectively address this concern. Creating a protected area for the animals which are facing extinction can be a solution where a human’s presence should be restricted. Additionally, governments should enforce strict laws to reduce the use of plastic and research should be done to find the alternate of plastic bags and product wrappers.
To conclude, in order to preserve biodiversity collaborative efforts are required from governments and people, enlightening others about environmental changes can surely help us on this mission.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41379310345 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00661379563 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610344827586 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6547044763 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134804039257 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404315490945 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533380960838 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684424809642 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410680155755 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.