You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and was not able to play with you at the weekend. You decided to write to him in hospital, telling him about the matter
Tell him which team won
Describe the conditions on the day
Say how you felt about the match
Dear Raman
I was so sorry to hear about your accident! I hope you're feeling a lot better today and that it is not too boring in hospital.
The match on Friday was very disappointing. The score was to all, probably because you were not there to score the extra goal. The awful thing was that you we were winning until 10 minutes before the end, but suddenly they scored another goal and I was so shocked when I saw the ball hit the block off the net.
I think the weather was to blame. It was a really wet day and the pitch was very muddy,at the end of the game no one could able to see the grass properly due to this Everyone was exhausted.I am not satisfied with the performance because all the members of our team were working very hard for this mess but aftermath were not as per our expectation.
Let let us know about when you will come at home? On the next match, I will send someone to bring you at the match, so that you can see the next match. All the team members send their regards to you and I hope that you will fine soon.
Yours truly
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ry to hear about your accident! I hope youre feeling a lot better today and that it ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...were not there to score the extra goal. The awful thing was that you we were winnin...
^^^
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , at
...lly wet day and the pitch was very muddy,at the end of the game no one could able t...
^^^
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...erly due to this Everyone was exhausted.I am not satisfied with the performance b...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Let
...ath were not as per our expectation. Let let us know about when you will come at hom...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that you will fine soon. Yours truly Aman
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15384615385 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05632143408 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.774052634 44.8134815571 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222096599673 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824559932488 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057424735573 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120856455346 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522892005873 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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