In the past, many people had skills such as making their own clothes and doing repairs to think in the house. In many countries, skills like these are disappearing.
-Why do you think this change is happening.
-How far in this situation true in your country
Nowadays, traditional skills like weaving, making the clothes and maintenance of the things at home are diminishing increasingly. I will portray the reasons behind this change and illustrate my own country situation in regard to this issue in subsequent segments.
To commence with, the predominant responsible factor is advancement in technology. Due to this, a plethora of machines has been introduced in the market which makes the products in just few minutes rather than a long time period and it gives the opportunity to the people to purchase these products on reasonable prices instead of high-priced rates of the home-made products. As a result, the demand of the home-made products are diminshing, consequently its manufacturing is automatically decreasing. Apart from this, in the bygone era people repaired the things at home because these were easy to understand but nowadays, it is quite difficult to understand the manufacturing of the modern equipments because of its complexity. For instance, in the past if any problem was occurred in fan, then people solved it at home because it contained just few nuts and other things but modern fans contains lots of things not only the nuts.
In fact, in my country India, traditional skills are still exist in old remote areas where people could be seen doing such kind of works at home. However, this tradition is slowly disappearing as new advancement are spreading its roots in all over the world.
To recapitulate, sometimes this becomes a necessity to go with the changing world. People are adopting new clothes, techniques and living standards so quickly that these old routines good severely exist.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, still, then, apart from, for instance, in fact, kind of, as a result, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2156133829 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96330333421 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617100371747 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5216148269 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.545454545 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193870429888 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690140855677 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517402065224 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127154006073 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556443706796 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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