You receive an email from a friend which talks about his work life. Read the following extract and write
a reply giving them advice about the situation.
Hi,
How are you doing? Sorry I didn’t reply sooner because I’ve been very busy lately. I just received your email. I am writing to you today to offer some kind of advice. Also, I thank you for taking me into confidence in order to consult about a decision regarding your work. I am sorry about your current situation, I am sure we can brainstorm something to relieve you from this issue. As you said, I knew that you work long days. My first advice is to you, no matter what, you have to put your family first. On top of that you should change your job or career. Also, there is one more way, you should tell your boss to reduce your working hours. In addition, the best thing to do is meditate alone for 5 minutes in every morning. I’d recommend that you shouldn’t worry and get stressed. Then you will have time for everything, like family and friends. Always be patient! I hope you my suggestion would help you decide what is best for you. If you have any questions, please ask. I can always contact whenever you need something or a hand of help or talk about anything. I am ready to help as much as I can, as always. I look forward to your reply, just don’t wait too long, because I’m worried. Think carefully about my advice. As I said before, I hope my advice will be useful for you.
Sincerely
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- letter 11
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- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time Which of these situations do think is better 63
- You receive an email from a friend which talks about his work life Read the following extract and write a reply giving them advice about the situation 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 852, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: Be Always
...or everything, like family and friends. Always be patient! I hope you my suggestion would...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1110, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...I am ready to help as much as I can, as always. I look forward to your reply, just don...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1118, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dy to help as much as I can, as always. I look forward to your reply, just don’t ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, regarding, so, then, in addition, kind of, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34412955466 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25947931322 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623481781377 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2402042071 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.65 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.35 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201246377944 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066432567484 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041598858196 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201656047224 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.0 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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