You receive an email from a friend which talks about his work life. Read the following extract and write
a reply giving them advice about the situation.
How are you? I hope you are well, I am writing this letter to give you an advice about work stress and understanding of your current situation. I learned about the problem, which you seem to be currently facing at your work and family. Of course, I feel a bit frustrated about this issue of yours, but please understand that this kind of problem is not very unique. I share several my personal rules with you. At this point,I suppose you should negotiate flex hours or part-time hours if possible.You need to consider your values and set your priorities. For example,negotiate with your employer for flex hours or job-sharing that would be more conducive to your family life.
Besides, you should find time for fun.Keep in mind that work is only you. We only go around once, so it’s important to enjoy your life and make time for fun. You not only look for opportunities to enjoy life both at home and at work but also try to find the humour in things. Apart from that ,you should build rituals into your life.Plan everything in advance and schedule time to ensure that family time happens. Establish a family movie or games night. Make meal time sacred family time when you sit down together for dinner and take turns sharing the day’s events. It helps you to communicate with your wife as well.And also take time for yourself.It means that it's something you should do not matter how tired you are.Drag yourself out the door to your fitness class, afterwards you will be in better humour and happy that you did something for yourself. Have your one favourite show a week and protect that time.
I hope my suggestion would help you decide what is best for you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...l, I am writing this letter to give you an advice about work stress and understanding of ...
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Line 1, column 354, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...rstand that this kind of problem is not very unique. I share several my personal rules with...
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Line 1, column 424, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...y personal rules with you. At this point,I suppose you should negotiate flex hours...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...ex hours or part-time hours if possible.You need to consider your values and set yo...
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Line 1, column 567, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , negotiate
...ues and set your priorities. For example,negotiate with your employer for flex hours or jo...
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Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Keep
... Besides, you should find time for fun.Keep in mind that work is only you. We only...
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Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e for fun.Keep in mind that work is only you. We only go around once, so it’s imp...
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Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t also try to find the humour in things. Apart from that ,you should build ritual...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d the humour in things. Apart from that ,you should build rituals into your life....
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Line 2, column 335, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Plan
...you should build rituals into your life.Plan everything in advance and schedule time...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...u to communicate with your wife as well.And also take time for yourself.It means th...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...as well.And also take time for yourself.It means that its something you should do ...
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Line 2, column 724, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Drag
... should do not matter how tired you are.Drag yourself out the door to your fitness c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, well, apart from, for example, i feel, i suppose, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 32.9175257732 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 297.0 206.0 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63973063973 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44843891754 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 127.690721649 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9665389814 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8666666667 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16757584634 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705313652993 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678828308672 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115145847243 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526459678823 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.