You received a letter form an airline company for your feedback for your latest flight with them. Write a letter to the Customer Service Manager
• Say what reasons made you choose this airline.
• Something that you liked about the flight
• Suggest an improvement
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in respond to your request for a feedback regarding my latest flight with your esteemed airline company, and which I and my family enjoyed a lot.
First of all, I would like to begin with the reason for choosing your company for my latest flight. Although I travel a lot with another airline company, I decided to book a flight your company as a friend of mine told me that he had a comfortable and enjoyable flight with your company.
The thing I really liked about the flight is the installed movie player. Despite the fact that all airline companies have a movie player, my children really enjoyed your interactive movie player that allows passengers to choose what to watch.
However, it worth mentioning that the legs space between the seats are narrow and that was very disturbing for me and my wife. I believe that widening the space between the seats would be a great improvement.
I look forward to hearing from you in the near future
Yours faithfully,
Muhammad Ramzy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... passengers to choose what to watch. However, it worth mentioning that the le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, regarding, so, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78770949721 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44454106747 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603351955307 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2598859013 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 4.34317383033 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341001318676 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139626083111 0.0766984524023 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101719157454 0.0603063233224 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161793247399 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108466360814 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.