You received a letter from a friends asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Dear James,
I am writing a reply letter to you who is clearly in a dilemma about getting a degree or looking for employment. I strongly suggest you to get a job.
I know your parents want you to enroll in college but you need to follow your heart instead of listening to your parent's words. I can see your passion about cooking and your dream to have your own restaurant. Moreover, culinary skills require more practical experiences rather than sitting in the class.
Going to college was a stepping stone to a better job in the past. Nowadays, getting a degree is not sufficient to start a professional career and promote in it. I recommend you to consider that unemployment rates of graduate students have extremely increased in our country in the last decade. Frankly, you can acquire practical skills at school but it is limited. Hence, the best way to learn specialist skills is by experience in a real working environment.
On the one hand, you can look for a position in a restaurant with a top chef because this can be really suitable for you since you do not have any relevant experience at first. This being the case, you can improve your expertise in culinary skills by watching and learning from your senior colleagues. On the other hand, you can run your own restaurant as a manager and recruit some cooks and a head-chef so you can provide exotic foods, a nice atmosphere and friendly service.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Tommy Comperor
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I strongly suggest you to get a job. I know your parents want you to enroll in...
^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ead of listening to your parents words. I can see your passion about cooking and ...
^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nice atmosphere and friendly service. I am looking forward to hearing from you...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, frankly, hence, look, moreover, really, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74045801527 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65785917085 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1877811165 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269304903995 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979427064787 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885353245987 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173070105015 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939054707535 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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