You received a letter from your friend informing you about his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advise on
- which places they should visit
- where should they live
- Invite them to do something with you
Dear Massie,
Hope you're well, i just received your letter seeking for my advice about your parents coming to town.
Williamsburg is a nice place to visit with them; this place is most known for its American revolution museums, historical reenactments and restored battlefields. Another interesting spot to visit is Tulum, mediation lesson on this warm beach is an amazing experience. Last but not the least is valley of the temple, it is an archaeological site with Greece art and architecture.
you guys should definitely stay at the famous the plaza hotel. this hotel have hosted some of the 20th century's most famous musical names-from Miles Davis to Peggy Lee. They also serve the best wine and have a lot of natural habitat scenery from across the pool.
I'd love for you and your parents to join me on not too strenous activities, such as kayaking and biking. Or slow-walking along the shady cobblestone street of colonial Williamsburg.
I can't wait to catch up with you and parents.
see you soon
Williams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Massie, Hope youre well, i just received your le...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Massie, Hope youre well, i just received your letter seeki...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...e with Greece art and architecture. you guys should definitely stay at the famo...
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Suggestion: This
...ely stay at the famous the plaza hotel. this hotel have hosted some of the 20th cent...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...the plaza hotel. this hotel have hosted some of the 20th centurys most famous musical name...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve hosted some of the 20th centurys most famous musical names-from Miles Davis to...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...bitat scenery from across the pool. Id love for you and your parents to join m...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... street of colonial Williamsburg. I cant wait to catch up with you and parents. ...
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Suggestion: See
...t to catch up with you and parents. see you soon Williams
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p with you and parents. see you soon Williams
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01744186047 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74642079877 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.726744186047 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6977671362 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4545454545 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337255765199 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975128850568 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772606802202 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150952679691 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710769084887 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.