You recently applied for 2 separate jobs. Both have chosen to hire you, but you must write a letter to 1 of them explaining why you are unable to take the position. Include in your letter:
· An apology
· An explanation of your situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I have decided to move ahead this time with JP Morgan instead of your company's job offer, although it was you only who processed my offer letter within 3 working days.
Secondly, I would like to present my sincerest apologies for abandoning your offer and accepting theirs. This is because of the wonderful and one in a life time opportunity which I am getting at the moment out of this job.
Thirdly, I would like to let you know that they are giving me the valuable chance to work from our headquarters office based in Toronto Canada and on top of that they are offering sponsorship for me to move to Canada. Finally, I don't want to do this injustice with me for which I would regret in my life.
Yours faithfully
Faizal Reza
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d my offer letter within 3 working days. Secondly, I would like to present my sin...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...s because of the wonderful and one in a life time opportunity which I am getting at the m...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m getting at the moment out of this job. Thirdly, I would like to let you know th...
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Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ip for me to move to Canada. Finally, I dont want to do this injustice with me for w...
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Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... me for which I would regret in my life. Yours faithfully Faizal Reza
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... regret in my life. Yours faithfully Faizal Reza
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, you know, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54054054054 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49597923565 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655405405405 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6804123711 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 16.3608247423 299% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.041523453 44.8134815571 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.0 76.5299724578 293% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.3333333333 16.8248392259 293% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 4.34317383033 576% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174211928654 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11221288283 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804115124898 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086875247764 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840637745935 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 8.37731958763 294% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 70.7449484536 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.0 7.45979381443 268% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.94 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 8.62886597938 313% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 8.54432989691 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.