You are a student who wants to apply to green pines college. you are experiencing financial problems at the moment.
Write a letter to the principal of the college
. explaining your situation
. ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial help available.
I am writing this letter to enquire about the grants or concession if available against undergraduate degree at Green Pines College. First of all, I am a sophomore student and I would like to apply for a undergraduate degree at green pines but because of financial crisis I am unable to make any progress at the moment.
Secondly, I would really appreciate if you can take time out of your busy schedule and share the valuable information on acquiring funds from different sources. Furthermore, I would be thankful to you, if you can check my eligibility criteria under Federal Education Scheme.
Finally, I would be glad if you can drop me an email with compiled list of scholarships offered by university and any external finance options available at lower rate of Interest throughout the United States of America for international students.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully
FaizalReza
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e student and I would like to apply for a undergraduate degree at green pines but...
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Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...able to make any progress at the moment. Secondly, I would really appreciate if y...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...criteria under Federal Education Scheme. Finally, I would be glad if you can drop...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s of America for international students. I am looking forward to hearing from you...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ooking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully FaizalReza
^^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you soon. Yours Faithfully FaizalReza
^^^
Line 10, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... soon. Yours Faithfully FaizalReza
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08282255513 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688311688312 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6804123711 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 16.3608247423 312% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.128207543 44.8134815571 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.0 76.5299724578 348% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.3333333333 16.8248392259 305% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.6666666667 4.34317383033 660% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258252961936 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163663075887 0.0766984524023 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418934093471 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123688119059 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561677293895 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.6 8.37731958763 341% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 70.7449484536 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 7.45979381443 311% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 7.59969072165 141% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 8.54432989691 262% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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