Dear sir,
Greetings of the day ! Through this letter I would like to Express my sincerest apology about not able to do the job offer provided by you last week after interview.
As a matter of fact, I really want the job of human resource manager with your renowned company, but owing to some unforeseen circumstances I would not be able to perform my job duties very well.
Having said that, actually I recently got a job opportunity in my hometown with the same job position I have applied in your company. And I thought that the former one must be good for me as owing to the less distance as compared to the latter. Moreover, it will certainly provide me an extra time to enjoy with my kith and kins; however if I choose the job with you I will have to stay in a paying guest which not only effect my savings, but also I will have to stay away from my family which I couldn't afford.
I hope you would understand the genuinity of the situation, and I am apologizing again for the inconvenience.
Yours sincerely,
Jacob Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 421, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...o stay in a paying guest which not only effect my savings, but also I will have to sta...
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Line 7, column 497, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ave to stay away from my family which I couldnt afford. I hope you would understand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47643979058 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54370968948 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628272251309 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5742152566 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 4.34317383033 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244029159518 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106481539838 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04581443656 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133723213774 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436476223979 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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