Dear Ron,
How are you? First of all, heartful gratitude to you for the book which you had lent me last month in order to make my presentation, also, I want to tell you that how delighted I am feeling owing to attaining first position in the marketing presentation.
Well, to be honest, I was waiting for this international marketing presentation since the time I had joined Amazon ; an e-commerce company as a senior marketing manager. Fortunately, the opportunity came, and I did not want to let it go, because it was not only related to my careers growth, but also provided me a chance to present myself in front of foreign delegates, which certainly led to the international job offerings.
That being said, your book had helped me a lot to clear my perception on the ways of online marketing. What is more the do's and don'ts that a seller must follow while marketing the variety of products that were to be included in my presentation also got cleared by your book.
So, I am visiting you next week along with your precious book , and I will bring your favourite sweet as a treat.
I thank you once again. looking forward to meeting you soon.
Regards,
Mariya
- Nowadays most people choose to throw away broken things instead of repairing them and replace them with new ones Why is this happening What problems may it lead to 84
- You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes Write a letter to the community college In your letter say which advertisement you are answering describe which course s you want to teach and what it they would 78
- You ride a bicycle to work but there is a problem with the parking Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company In your letter you should tell why you ride a bicycle to work what the problem is with the parking 73
- Tou just spend holidays at your friend s home and left your wallet there Write a letter to your friend Thank you friend for the holiday Give them instruction how to send it back 73
- Giving Pocket Money to Children is very common in many countries Discuss both the advantages as well as disadvantages about the practice and what is your opinion about it 10
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Ron, How are you? First of all, heartful grat...
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... month in order to make my presentation, also, I want to tell you that how delig...
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...in order to make my presentation, also, I want to tell you that how delighted I ...
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... in the marketing presentation. Well, to be honest, I was waiting for this int...
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...y came, and I did not want to let it go, because it was not only related to my ca...
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...on also got cleared by your book. So, I am visiting you next week along with ...
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...ook. So, I am visiting you next week along with your precious book , and I wi...
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...as a treat. I thank you once again. looking forward to meeting you soon. Regards...
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...forward to meeting you soon. Regards, Mariya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, so, well, while, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68269230769 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75547692083 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.659102234 44.8134815571 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299627465433 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121251517686 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809162925323 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159970329207 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847794377403 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.