Dear Jim,
First of all, thanks for inviting me to this interesting and useful conference. I am writing this to seek your permission to give a presentation about customer engagement skills and strategies. I would like to share my knowledge with my colleagues which I gained from the conference.
In the conference, they covered essential topics such as customer engagement technics and how to improve the effective communication skills while conducting market trading. They also cover the current issues often reported due to poor consumer interaction and propose alternate solutions to address these problems. So, I think the information is extremely valuable and I want to share with all staffs with your permission.
As we are in marketing firm, I suppose everyone in our organization should participate in this briefing. Because I want to talk about new methods, approaches and ethics which are unique and beneficial to improve the conversation with our customers. It’s a one hour session and I want to conduct this in the seminar hall of our company. I hope you would consider my proposal and allow me to present my views to others.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Shravan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, so, while, i suppose, i think, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95152152117 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.105808592 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7272727273 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149213825376 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515305405449 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696067037885 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944888951134 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554901535671 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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