Dear Mike,
I have just returned to home after spending 3 nights of stay at your hotel in Rain Tree. The hospitality was impeccable and the staffs were very friendly. However, I feel I must express the dissatisfaction about the room.
As you know, the weather in Canada is extremely cold during the winter season. At night, the temperature easily drops below -5 degrees. It’s impossible for anyone to manage without a heater.
I arrived the hotel around 12am in the morning. It was a long flight from India, so I wanted to rest for some time. When I switch on the heater, it started making a weird noise and stopped working. I called up the reception and they promised me to send the technical in one hour but no help arrived. I had to manage entire night with the blanket and locked doors all time. It created a lot of distress and lack of sleep.
I booked your hotel after reading good reviews in Trip Advisor but in reality, the experience was not pleasant. So, I think it would be good idea if you insist your room service team to inspect the quality of the heaters, air conditioners thoroughly before the guest checked into the room and would certainly make the rooms more comfortable. Perhaps you would consider giving me a discount if I come into your hotel again.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Shravan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...ther in Canada is extremely cold during the winter season. At night, the temperature easily drops...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, i feel, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65690376569 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49786239384 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669456066946 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4383636748 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5625 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9375 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220720759707 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058085459335 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549092814365 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100440069236 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410789643054 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.