You took your family to a nearby restaurant You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant In your letter explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems

Dear Rick,

I am writing to express my bad experience about the meal we had at ARC’s Restaurant last Monday. My family had accompanied me to this food joint.

We were there to celebrate our first anniversary dinner. The main reason we choose your restaurant because we noticed that you have a good rating for customer service in Trip Advisor.

The meals that we were served was completely letdown. First of all, the food was unhygienic as the utensils were not cleaned properly when its served. Additionally, the chicken fried rice was overcooked that hindered the taste of culinary delight.

I would like to elicit two suggestions which can improve the current situation. The management should take extra care to inspect the cleanliness of utensils carefully. Also, chef should take responsibility and ensure the quality of the food is not compromised before it was served to customers.

I hope you thoroughly consider the solicited suggestions and I look forward to hear from you.

In the meantime, please let me know if you have any further questions.

Best regards,

Shravan

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 77, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...olicited suggestions and I look forward to hear from you. In the meantime, please l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17318435754 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79564147345 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698324022346 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7424845064 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2307692308 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213461818138 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058520346491 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524983711141 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952585853069 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455765893247 0.0580467560999 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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