You recently attended a meeting at hotel, when you returned home, you have found you left some important papers at the hotel. Write the letter to the manager of the hotel :Say where you think you have left papersExplain why they are so importantTell the m

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You recently attended a meeting at hotel, when you returned home, you have found you left some important papers at the hotel. Write the letter to the manager of the hotel :
Say where you think you have left papers
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want him/her to do?

Dear Jack,
I came to your hotel yesterday to attend an important contract signing ceremony between our company and an international software house. We had concluded our meeting at 5:30 pm and left for home. I am writing this letter to seek your support as I have mistakenly forgot some very critical documents at the meeting hall. I was sitting in the front right corner of the hall and after signing ceremony I compiled all the papers and put them over seat next to me; I am sure they must be picked up later by your cleaning staff. That file contains some very important documents such as contract signing certificate, company’s financial statement of the year and also a copy of contract clauses. Those documents are of paramount importance for our company and should not be misplaced.
Therefore, I request you to get it checked immediately at the same place or check with your lost and found department if someone has submitted the file there. Once found, please courier them to my office address on my name. Please also make sure to make a copy of all the documents, scan them and share a soft copy with me as well. I am looking forward to your extended support here.
Yours Sincerely,
Sam

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jack, I came to your hotel yesterday to attend...
^^^
Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
... seek your support as I have mistakenly forgot some very critical documents at the mee...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xtended support here. Yours Sincerely, Sam
^^^
Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d support here. Yours Sincerely, Sam
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70283018868 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61514385725 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650943396226 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4113502986 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6363636364 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1562227379 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483418153736 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515317046683 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1030396995 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216812784979 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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