You recently attended a meeting at a hotel When you returned home you found you had left come important papers at the hotel Write a letter to the manager of the hotel In your letter 1 Say where you think you left the papers 2 Explain why they are so impor

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left come important papers at the hotel.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter

1. Say where you think you left the papers
2. Explain why they are so important
3. tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you with sorrow to inform you that, I have kept my important documents there after the conclusion of the meeting yesterday. I was carrying with me, while I evacuated the conference hall. Subsequently, I laced them in the nearby cushion in lobby until I was waiting for the taxi. I cannot remember whether I took it afterwards.

Those documents highly important for me As I am the secretary of the committee, I was writing the discussion points to draft the meeting minutes. Further, it consists of original policy documents, which are highly confidential as well. Those documents, including the minutes should be submitted to the Chairman within next three working days.

Considering the above, I would be thankful, if you could please locate them at your earliest. if you able to find them, kindly put them into an envelope, seal it and keep it under your custody. More importantly, contact me immediately, contact me immediately through the following mobile number, so that I would be able to collect them personally.

Sorry for any inconveniences.

Thanking you

Yours faithfully,
R. Aravindhan

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
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Suggestion: thereafter
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hairman within next three working days. Considering the above, I would be thankf...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ld please locate them at your earliest. if you able to find them, kindly put them ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13829787234 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97686111998 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.289347227 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183552469833 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673629840943 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936506569623 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735527767892 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650556407554 0.0580467560999 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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