You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her
Dear Sir,
I am writing to ask about some missing official papers and my business cards. I may have left them at the bouquet hall of your hotel, during Fairbank yearly retreat program last weekend.
Unfortunately, I sat on the last table at the back of the hall, and I placed the documents on the floor, because of the limited space available. Also, there was high turn up of people at the event than what we budgeted. This leads to overcrowding of the hall in a bid to manage the crowd.
As you know, official documents are always highly confidential . Especially, since the papers are our organization New product paper. our managing director just endorsed the paper at the event hence the reason I brought it to the center.
Based on the forgoing, kindly aid investigate the missing item with your employees as soon as possible. Please call my mobile number 08054195143 with the outcome of the investigation.
I look forward to a favourable response soon.
Yours faithfully
James Bond
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... was high turn up of people at the event than what we budgeted. This leads to ove...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...documents are always highly confidential . Especially, since the papers are our or...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...are our organization New product paper. our managing director just endorsed the pap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, look, may, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92352941176 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.738803216 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694117647059 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3100049282 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.75 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179995554985 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507605300563 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451105880815 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073294794869 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069097201955 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.