You recently bought a new piece of equipment for your home but it did not work. You phoned the store but still, no action has been taken. Write a letter to the store manager
-describe what equipment you bought
-explain the problem with new equipment
-say what would you like the manager to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about a newly bought microwave oven.
Lately, I bought a microwave oven which was manufactured by the Samsung India company. Its model was SMJX4103, and it cost me for $579.
After the first 4-5 usage, it stopped completely. I observed that there might be some trouble while pressing its power button. Although I tried to resolve the issue by contacting the customer care centre, I am still unable to press it. When I tried to contact your service engineer, I was told that the complaint would be attended within the two working days. Unfortunately, even after 7 days, no person has come to me to address my genuine complaint.
As this product is under warranty, I am entitled to ask for it to be repaired or replaced it with a new one. However, I have decided to take a new product in replacement due to the inconvenience caused by it. Besides, please call me personally whenever you receive this letter.
Eagerly waiting for your response.
Yours faithfully,
Dheeraj Goyal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, so, still, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90449438202 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73797885604 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702247191011 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3834688115 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1538461538 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6923076923 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132932732558 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419159299841 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288745740653 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708544953467 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297319725777 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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