Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Mary Anne, I was one of the registered student in your short cookery course, conducted last month from 3rd November to 16th November.
I really enjoyed the course, as I got to learn so many different Cuisine at the cookery school. The most amazing part of the course was that we had an opportunity to learn new dishes from the real life chef. Our head chef was Chef Vikas Gupta, and he gave personal attention to each students and helped us to perfect every recipe
I would also like to mention that, before this course I was an average cook, and was not really interested in cooking either. However, after completing this course, I have developed great interest in cooking and have been able to justify the taste of the food that i make. So, I am really proud of my self for achieving such state of satisfaction in cooking and this is all because of your cookery classes.
After having such an amazing experience with your cookery classes, I want to suggest you to start special baking classes, so that people having specific interest in Dessert making can join that class. Also, I will be the one to join it.
Thank you
Yours Faithfully
Mary Anne.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Cuisine seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much different Cuisine', 'a good deal of different Cuisine'.
Suggestion: much different Cuisine; a good deal of different Cuisine
...njoyed the course, as I got to learn so many different Cuisine at the cookery school. The most amazing...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...njoyed the course, as I got to learn so many different Cuisine at the cookery school. The most...
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Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e real life chef. Our head chef was Chef Vikas Gupta, and he gave personal attent...
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Line 6, column 266, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e to justify the taste of the food that i make. So, I am really proud of my self ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67452830189 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34195619322 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627358490566 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0790772064 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.111111111 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219472766936 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862030397472 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478663383487 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108970814386 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250150511946 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.