You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority.
In your letter, you should tell:
explain how you knew about the plans
describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood
suggest a possible solution to the problem.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to you regarding the construction of airport in our area, which I have recently come to know from the neighbours.
Building an airport in the locality will have many repercussions. Due to the close proximity, there will be high levels of noise and air pollution at all times of the day which might cause issues like hearing imparment, heart problems for those who can not stand loud noises as well as respiratory diseases. The senior citizens in the locality will also suffer greatly as most of them have insomnia.
May I recommend you to relocate the airport to another place, away from the residential area in order to reduce the amount of pollution. You could provide frequent shuttle services within the area instead that would take passengers directly to the airport which would be greatly appreciated by the community.
Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing the possible measures you would take regarding the matter.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...ill have many repercussions. Due to the close proximity, there will be high levels of noise and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, may, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03592814371 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74511909667 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664670658683 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2634100101 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4444444444 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216982332071 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10189970826 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660968455979 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128991546345 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543544537474 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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