You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority.
In your letter, you should tell:
explain how you knew about the plans
describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood
suggest a possible solution to the problem
Dear sir,
I am writing this regarding the airport which is going to be built in my neighbourhood. I came to know about this plan from the newspaper
advertisement 'The times'.
My name is Ramandeep kaure and living in Q Apartments, about 4 km away from construction site. That's why,I think of mentioning some negative aspects about it. Firstly, whole site is mostly surrounded by residential area, as a result, it may cause chaos among all societies. Secondly, due to constuction work and later on the loud noise of aeroplanes or other things may disturb the lives of other people.
I would be really grateful if you could think of
another possible location which needs to be separated from residential areas, but nearer to the city. So that, people can easily reach their without any transporting difficulties.
I hope to a positive response response from
your side.
Your faithfully,
Ramandeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... know about this plan from the newspaper advertisement The times. My name is Ram...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...about 4 km away from construction site. Thats why,I think of mentioning some negative...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...m away from construction site. Thats why,I think of mentioning some negative aspec...
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Line 8, column 22, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: response
...ing difficulties. I hope to a positive response response from your side. Your faithfully, Ram...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91226525043 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.746666666667 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0486804317 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131255222171 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505997217974 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422306724565 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0374122301028 0.12726935374 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396000173654 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.