Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the work . To what extent do you fact that agree or disagree? Give reasons.
Value of regional languages are keep on decreasing each year. Few people believe that with the use of fewer languages would allow you to speak efficiently with others, whereas, it will cause the disappearance of many cultural communities around the globe. I moderately agree with aforementioned statement and will discuss it in detail before reaching any
conclusion.
To commence with, the people who seem to think that it is completely redundant to learn different diverse languages. It could be more easy to communicate, if, there are only some languages. Then, it will bring globalisation in the world in terms of revenue and trade. Moreover, international business will increase among different nations by bridging up the gap of communication barrier. For example, English is widely spoken language in the whole world and really help the dwellerd to communicate and easily interact with other people. Thus, by legalising fewer languages will definitely bring positive revolution in business.
In contrast, usage of fewer languages will shatter the integrity which represent the cultural and communal background of a place. Because, mother tongue is not just a mere language, it is a mirror of a society. For instance, In India about 400 local languages are spoken around the nation, will be helpful in learning the importance of it for upcoming generations. As a result, with the extinction of various languages worldwide will responsibile for the extinction of their own culture and diversities.
In conclusion, these days, many people find that it is unimportant to bother about the less use of cultural languages, although, this will ultimately lead to indirect defiling of national or regional identity. I believe that it is reliable to have one international language, but, it is also important to give importance to every language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89118629667 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8344081491 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220029734612 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699201137884 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362560860641 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855896849728 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511681113051 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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