You recently learnt that the best teacher you ever had will be retiring soon.
Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter
Explain how you heard about his/her retirement
Describe what made him/her such a great teacher
Say how your teacher affected your life
Dear Ms Sally,
I am writing to send you good wishes for your upcoming retirement.
Recently, I ran across my high school friend, James Smith, He informed me that you are retiring on may after 40years of teaching at our school.
I want you to know how much your teaching impacted my life. As you may remember, I used to struggle a lot in English before I took your class. To be honest, I still remember dreading in your first class. However, Your excitement in the subject made me excited as well. The way of your story telling has helped me a lot in understanding pronunciation of words in English. I know you saw me struggling while reading it, but you were always encouraging and you helped me learn from my mistakes.
By the end of that school year, I felt confident about English and , to my own surprise, I enjoyed it! I ended up studying engineering in college and got a good job as software engineer. I am consistently required to have daily meeting with US clients. I believe without your amazing classes, I would not have been able to successfully interact with clients in English without any hesitation.
Thank you for all your support and enduring impact you have had on my life.
Yours sincerely,
xxx
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 29, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
... school. I want you to know how much your teaching impacted my life. As you may r...
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Line 6, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a lot in understanding pronunciation of words in English. I know you saw me stru...
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Line 8, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...year, I felt confident about English and , to my own surprise, I enjoyed it! I end...
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Line 8, column 254, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to have daily meeting with US clients. I believe without your amazing classes, I...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64678899083 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69846401763 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646788990826 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6846146915 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9230769231 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252285168441 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994986520921 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603728721316 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13580214383 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789016056431 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.