Dear Dave,
I am writing to need a favor from you for a training course named "Advanced communication skills", published yesterday in Times newspaper.
As the course name suggests, it will be an advanced level of basic communication skill training. It includes different modules such as fluent speech, writing practice, giving presentations to clients along with conversion with them formally. It will be a one hour course, seven days a week.
Although I could have reserved a seat for myself, due to limited available seats, only those who are sponsored by managers are allowed to take the course. Thus I am not able to register it by myself. I would really appreciate If you could refer my name and provide sponsorship for the same.
Admittedly, there are many benefits undergoing it, Like it will improve my speaking skills along with fluency and vocabulary. As a result, it would be easy for me to provide status on a daily call with clients. Moreover, it would improve my presentation skills and incoming seminars in our project, I will be able to perform better. Finally, my task for writing formal letters will be error-less.
Considering above points in mind, I hope you will provide your support and help me with it.
Yours sincerely,
Xxx Dsd
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 156, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...anagers are allowed to take the course. Thus I am not able to register it by myself....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, really, so, thus, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03773584906 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89826920767 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655660377358 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6693095809 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1538461538 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253893490809 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832145355675 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565353291876 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126346187731 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257556734147 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.