You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town However the meal and the service were terrible The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem so you left without a resolution State what pro

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this email to express my dissatisfaction regarding your food and services that we received on September 25. We had an advanced booking for 7:00 pm, and we were there at 6:55 pm.

When we were at your restaurant, nobody came to us to know about our requirements. After 15 minutes, I went to the counter and talked about our booking. Afterward, the counter person called one waiter. She took us to our seats. However, the seats are comfortable for only 4 peoples, but I booked for 5. I complain about the seats to the waiter, however, nobody gives any reactions.

After 30 minutes another guy came to take the order, we ordered authentic Italian pizza and french wine. The waiter took a long time to get our order. The wine we got is so test-less and it is very different than what we thought and the pizza is also burned a bit more. Besides, the bill we got also included the service charges. I complain about this to the cashier, but he told me that is the company policy.

At last, I would like to suggest you investigate this kind of situation in your restaurant. Also, it is better to organize professional and ethics training for your employees. I also like to provide compensation for me regarding your services for that evening.

I hope you will consider my request and back to me as soon as possible.

Thank you for your time.

Best regards,
Sabin

Votes
Average: 7.7 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... complain about the seats to the waiter, however, nobody gives any reactions. ...
^^
Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...s so test-less and it is very different than what we thought and the pizza is also b...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, regarding, so, then, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.632 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61722295573 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.071106866 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.9473684211 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1578947368 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21052631579 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123599729546 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387345297463 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386226221737 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749741596471 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310995936933 0.0580467560999 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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