I appreciate the authorities' concern regarding the development of this town and as far as my opinion is concerned, I think that the construction of a shopping complex will be more beneficial than a recreational park.
There will be numerous benefits of having a shopping mall in this town. Currently, the local people have to go to the nearby city if they want quality and variety in the products they buy. So, a shopping complex will help the residents in all their shopping needs. However, there is no dearth of green areas in and around this town which lessens the need of any kind of park.
Apart from this, the inclusion of a restaurant and a movie theater will take care of the recreational needs of the locals and there will be no need to go out of the city to seek such facilities. Moreover, these facilities will also attract outsiders into the town and hence, it will give a boom to the local business as well.
Therefore, keeping in mind its immediate and long term benefits, I would like to have a hopping complex in my town
- You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town However the meal and the service were terrible The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem so you left without a resolution State what pro 77
- City Development SurveyYou live in a small town of 10,000 people. A large green area in the centre of town is undeveloped. The city has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents would like to have built in that area. Write a survey response support 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt and a movie theater will take care of the recreational needs of the locals and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, apart from, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56382978723 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63062972802 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6799175739 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155469231428 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706263444693 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032136384563 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957277672091 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324940877428 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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