You recently missed a job interview for a managerial position at a well-known company in your city.Write a letter to the owner of the company. In your letter:Apologise for missing the interviewExplain what happened.Requested another appointment for the in

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You recently missed a job interview for a managerial position at a well-known company in your city.
Write a letter to the owner of the company. In your letter:
Apologise for missing the interview
Explain what happened.
Requested another appointment for the interview.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to apologise for my absence in the last interview for a Cheif Information Officer position last Wednesday.

I hope the broad management could accept my sincere apology because I could not attend to the last final interview last week.

As my short notice prior to the meeting, I had to take an urgent flight to Ha Noi city on Tuesday night because the central server of my current corporate collapsed suddenly. I have responsibility for this issue and I also tackle this problem immediately on Wednesday. However, I was not able to arrive to the meeting due to no available flight to Ho Chi Minh city in the midnight.

In fact, this position is a real life-changing opportunity for me and I hope to have another chance. I will be really appreciated that the board member could arrange another interview if there is still a vacancy. Please let me know the schedule if any further arrangement.

I am looking forward to hearing from you in the near future.

Kind regards,
Khang Do.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, really, so, still, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77348066298 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75189149676 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7421337792 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146325607947 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500493216439 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662097708948 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825109967787 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798998870212 0.0580467560999 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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