You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you
Write a letter to your friend in your letter
.Invite him to stay and suggest a date
.Briefly describe the new house and garden
.Say why you like your new house
Dear Sania,
I hope my letter finds you in the pink of your health. you'd be glad to know that I have shifted in a new home couple of days ago.
It seems like ages since we met last, so I want you to visit my house,and stay with me. It would be a Win-Win situation, if you'll be able to come on this Saturday as neither you nor my office will be open on that day.
Believe me! the current bungalow is my dream house, for it has all the amenities ranging from garden, balconies to open kitchen. I had always been interested in all these facilities. Since it has large garden with beautiful flowers, I can pursue my hobby of gardening.
By the way, I love my house a lot owing to soul soothing ambience, which I always feel through views of sea. Apart from this, it has a home theatre which is amazing corner, as you know, I am a movie buff.
See you soon!
Yours affectionately,
Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Youd
...r finds you in the pink of your health. youd be glad to know that I have shifted in ...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
...r finds you in the pink of your health. youd be glad to know that I have shifted in ...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...et last, so I want you to visit my house,and stay with me. It would be a Win-Win sit...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...me. It would be a Win-Win situation, if youll be able to come on this Saturday as nei...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ll be open on that day. Believe me! the current bungalow is my dream house, for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, apart from, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27485380117 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3476018031 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690058479532 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8337474088 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.1 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199612334121 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750792560052 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626085296845 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110359050775 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557056960714 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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